A lot of intriguing ideas concerning narrativized experience, scripts, space, and a sort of posthuman collaborative agency (that includes the self among multiple types of force) generating the ‘voice’ of spaces. It took me some time, but I identified this last to be the central idea to glean from your presentation.

Because you assembled many ideas, ethnographic narratives and media, it was at times difficult to locate the thread. I would considerably trim down the content to a few resonating ideas that can each have their own space to resound within. This also means slowing down, adding pauses for emphasis. This does not necessarily mean to sacrifice breadth or depth – you can find a core argument or line of (inconclusive) thought and move closely along a single trajectory while alluding to the rhizomatic pathways that lead off this trajectory. Sometimes it is even more effective and narrativistically dramatic to do so (rather than overwhelming the audience with the dizzying array of possibilities). This may merely be a problem of interior/exterior – you may not have found a way to satisfyingly convey what you know well in plainer, but not unsubtle, terms to us, on the outside of the mode of thought you’re engaged in. One solution is to give us a cue or map of some sort at the beginning, preparing us for what’s to come, what to look for, AND then, step by step, giving us the payoff. The payoff is often not there because there is an inherent gap between theory and actuality. Despite the ability to be articulate in the language of subtle abstractions, it is still a challenge to track for an audience how abstractions work through concrete situations, experiences, feelings.

You also spend some time talking about the unique qualities of sound in virtual architecture and spaces – what it lacks and what is different when compared to RL architecture and spaces. Your ethnographic narratives were vivid and engaging and a nice breather to your theoretical discussons. I think it would be useful to more clearly make the connection between SL and RL (or vitual/actual?) you want to point out. If there are differences, then why do they matter? Do the differences give us a look at what things are to become for us all in RL? Do the differences just give us the ability to see more clearly what RL is like in terms of sound/space? Do the differences offered by SL sound/space experience allow us to experience RL sound/space differently?

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